NEW! Full manuscript critique from Author Jennifer Cervantes (Fantasy)

Plain and simple: I love kids and as an advocate of education in my own community I have seen the power of education.

Elie Wiesel said: “Words can sometimes, in moments of grace, attain the quality of deeds.”

The gift of words can never be underestimated.

The Prize: A full manuscript critique of your middle grade novel (244 pages double-spaced maximum.) HELLO!

Jennifer Cervantes

Jennifer Cervantes

The Darer:  Jennifer was born and raised in San Diego, CA. but spent many summers in New Mexico as a child. She didn’t think there was much to do there so she made up lots of adventures and read countless books to pass the time. Somehow, she found her way back to New Mexico (temporarily) to attend college and then she met a great guy, which lead her to make New Mexico her home (permanently). She lives with her husband, and three daughters (who are great at giving their opinions) spending much of her time writing, teaching English at the university, enjoying sunsets, and eating chile fresh from the family farm.

Jennifer is inspired by her daughters Alex, Bella, and Jules, their silly friends, amazing stories, and real issues concerning kids who need hope and a place to call home. Through her books she wants to inspire children to read, to dream, and to hope.

Her first novel, TORTILLA SUN will be published by Chronicle in spring 2010. She is currently working on her second novel, REMEMBER ME BLUE.

About Tortilla Sun

Tortilla Sun is a tender, magical story about 12 year old Izzy Roybal who is sent to spend the summer in her nana’s New Mexico village where she is soon caught up in the foreign world of her own culture, from patron saints and soulful food to the curious and magical blessings Nana gives her tortillas. In Nana’s village she meets Mateo, the adventurous, treasure seeking thirteen year old boy who lives on the other side of the bolted door in Izzy’s bedroom and six year old Maggie, who is raising her cat, Frida, as a dog and sees marshmallow ghosts float out windows.

When the wind begins to whisper to Izzy, she is soon led on an adventure to learn about her father’s mysterious death, who she really is, and to connect the hidden pieces of her past.

The Dare: Place a minimum bid of $35 by leaving a comment, then outbid the highest bidder until you win! *All winners must take the solemn critiquee oath.*

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20 Responses to NEW! Full manuscript critique from Author Jennifer Cervantes (Fantasy)

  1. Pamela Witte says:

    I’ll go 170.00.

  2. Jennifer says:

    11:59 pm EST July 8th. :)

  3. Pamela Witte says:

    This may sound like a silly question, but I don’t see mentioned the ending date for the auction. Would someone clue me in?

  4. Mercedes says:

    $165

  5. Jennifer says:

    Hey Jude (wasn’t thinking Beatles :) )

    Good luck with the auction AND the WIP!

  6. Jennifer says:

    So generous. Just think of all the books this will buy! :)

    Good luck!!!

  7. Pamela Witte says:

    Lets make that 160.00!

  8. Jude says:

    I’ll bid $150!

  9. Jennifer says:

    Hi Pamela,
    Yeah! A Land of Enchantment sister. I’m so excited you bid and thanks so much for supporting these kiddos! :)

    Good luck

  10. Pamela Witte says:

    Heck yeah! This is an awesome opportunity I simply can’t pass up! The money goes to a wonderful cause and I’d love to have my work critiqued by a fellow New Mexican!

    I’ll up the bid to $100.00

  11. Jennifer says:

    Hi Jude,
    Thanks for your generosity! I am more than happy to read several chapters at a time. I do like regular submissions only because I want to stay present with the story. So for example, you could submit a third to be followed by the two thirds in two subs. Does that make sense?

    great question :)

  12. Jude says:

    I bid $75, knowing full well that it’s worth so much more. . .

    A full critique is so generous of you, Jennifer.

    Can the winner send a work in progress in sections or do you prefer to wait for the whole MS at once? Is there a time limit if the high bidder wants feedback on one that’s not finished yet?

  13. Jennifer says:

    Hey Mandy,
    Me too! What a great cause and what fun to get to read an aspiring author’s work :)

  14. Mandy Silberstein says:

    I’ll bump up to $50. I’m excited Jennifer!

  15. Jennifer says:

    Yeah! More bids for kids :)
    Thanks so much

  16. Kate Fall says:

    I’ll take it to $45!

  17. Jennifer says:

    Thanks for bidding!! :) I love reviewing new manuscripts!

  18. Mandy says:

    I’ll get it started at $35