Critique #2 from Author Greg Trine (Action/Adventure/Fantasy)
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Greg Trine
The Prize: One critique of the first five pages of your double-spaced fiction young middle grade or chapter book manuscript.
The Darer: Greg Trine lives in his hideout in California, where he has been saving the world since the seventh grade. Like his favorite superhero, Greg has trouble stopping trains, though he can stop a truck simply by looking at it. He is the author of The Curse of the Bologna Sandwich, The Revenge of the McNasty Brothers, The Grateful Fred, Terror In Tights, The Fake Cape Caper, Attack of the Valley Girls, Brotherhood of the Traveling Underpants. Learn more about Greg.
“Woah. Greg Trine is author of seven–SEVEN chapter books with his original Melvin Beederman series. No doubt he can show you the ropes on how to reviese a chapter book (or young middle grade novel) into submission-shape, again and again … and again!” – Cynthea Liu.

Brotherhood of the Traveling Underpants
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